LibertyrAwr_

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jennie_015

hi ate Lindsayantoinette13 pwede po pabasa nung gawa ko first book po so hihingi po ako ng advise and yung mga kailangan baguhin ty po

LibertyrAwr_

@jennie_015  So uhmm, yeah. Hi! Hello! Nothing's wrong with your book, bawasan mo lang yung may mga sound effects instead of writing *boogssh* or *paakk* just write I heard some noises like that or may mga pagsabog or it's up to your style and if you are writing a story make sure nasa iisang plot lang siya dahil baka hindi nila maintindihan ang flow ng story and trust me I've been there and yeah! Yun lang yung advice ko dahil baguhan lang din ako! And read my new story entitled Queens It's the new version of Legendary! Muaps! A
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