Librarian_Books

Hey all! Working on the next chapter but wanted to post the relationships as of now. I put N/A on some of them do to either them not having a partner and is single or their partner's haven't been introduced yet. Within the next few chapters the guy from Chapter one is going to come up again. I'm really curious who everyone thinks it is! 
          	
          	Relationships	   				
          	Aurora- Martin
          	Beatrice- Daniel 			
          	Isabella- Fernando 
          	Ximena- Bryan 
          	Candy- N/A
          	Luna- N/A
          	Diego- N/A
          	Anthony- N/A
          	Saul- N/A

Librarian_Books

Hey all! Working on the next chapter but wanted to post the relationships as of now. I put N/A on some of them do to either them not having a partner and is single or their partner's haven't been introduced yet. Within the next few chapters the guy from Chapter one is going to come up again. I'm really curious who everyone thinks it is! 
          
          Relationships	   				
          Aurora- Martin
          Beatrice- Daniel 			
          Isabella- Fernando 
          Ximena- Bryan 
          Candy- N/A
          Luna- N/A
          Diego- N/A
          Anthony- N/A
          Saul- N/A

pinkskyyx

Hey! I read your chapters, and they are indeed great. Just a friendly suggestion: try adding spaces between your paragraphs, especially the ones with dialogue, as it makes reading easier for the reader. Otherwise, it's great!

Librarian_Books

@pinkskyyx Thanks! I add them but it doesn't save! I think I need to figure something out!
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pinkskyyx

@Librarian_Books Yes, that does happen sometimes. Don’t worry; when you write it next time, make sure to write them in that format so you won’t have to add them later, and you’ll be fine.
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