Librarian_Books

Just uploaded Chapter 5:)!

pinkskyyx

Hey! I read your chapters, and they are indeed great. Just a friendly suggestion: try adding spaces between your paragraphs, especially the ones with dialogue, as it makes reading easier for the reader. Otherwise, it's great!
          
          

Librarian_Books

@pinkskyyx Thanks! I add them but it doesn't save! I think I need to figure something out!
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pinkskyyx

@Librarian_Books Yes, that does happen sometimes. Don’t worry; when you write it next time, make sure to write them in that format so you won’t have to add them later, and you’ll be fine.
            
            
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