Lieutenant_Barr

I feel like rewriting Hybrid Among Men, and changing it up, but I don’t know how to do so. I want to make him a reincarnated soul from World War 1/2(would’ve fought in both). However, I don’t quite know. Any ideas, my friends? 
          	For context, it’s a High School DxD story. 
          	Just saying, perhaps I could rewrite it entirely and keep the storyline roughly the same but change key factors.

HuskyGambling

You ok

Lieutenant_Barr

@HuskyGambling if you wanna chat with me, I can drop the discord lol
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Lieutenant_Barr

@HuskyGambling Yuh, I just logged off of this account is all. I occasionally hop in to see previous ideas I had to reincorporate them into new ones on my new account
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nathaneskell

Hey I just wanted to give you an idea for the Marines graveyard thing but I don’t know how well it would work
          
          So I haven’t watch the full thing but I don’t know if you could squeeze it in you would have to rewrite it most likely allergies or delete some of your like well stories not stories but what but obviously I wouldn’t want to do that that this is just an idea maybe for one hour if you make another version of this
          
          But anyways maybe an intruder comes in and this is before they realize that he’s not like a pervert
          
          An intruder comes in while everyone was focus on killing him and he went into Mangels Cove and she can scream out for help because he put his hand over his mouth it was intense doing bad in touch and he saw this quickly ran out and tackled him jumping in Mangels cove and tackling him

nathaneskell

OK thanks for saying that you like the idea but I did read the entire thing but it looks like that you pretty much like you know I made it home how do you want to and maybe in your next story of a version of this if you make another one
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Lieutenant_Barr

@nathaneskell 
            Interesting, I like the idea. The grammar threw me off, but what you’re saying is that someone breaks in, not for perverse reasons, but simply just for the money. He gets in mangle’s cove, and she screams in fear, but he doesn’t realize what’s been happening and because of his confusion, he tries to leave and gets detained by Dean?
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Lieutenant_Barr

I feel like rewriting Hybrid Among Men, and changing it up, but I don’t know how to do so. I want to make him a reincarnated soul from World War 1/2(would’ve fought in both). However, I don’t quite know. Any ideas, my friends? 
          For context, it’s a High School DxD story. 
          Just saying, perhaps I could rewrite it entirely and keep the storyline roughly the same but change key factors.

Lieutenant_Barr

I apologize for the sudden disappearance! I’ve been super busy with my life recently. One of my good friends is coming to visit, but he’s having issues so I’m helping him with those. Then my job schedule changed and I’m dealing with sorting it out. Working on an update though, stay tuned!