So I'm making a story called Time. It's mostly centered around a girl named Alex. They get sucked into a time machine, back to 2020 BC. I want the father to end up as a chief of a village but not right away. And I want a vampire to discover him but it's a vampire that hates being a vampire. The village is currently Hitchcock but idk. I kind of want something more unique. John (the father) is going to land in the middle of a village or the dark forest. I'm not sure yet. Any ideas for transitions and such ?
