Lightronix

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Holy shit! 100k reads! Wow, you guys are amazing!
          	
          	I'll try to start updating more but I'm constantly up to my eyes in assignments :(
          	
          	Message me chapters you'd all like to see from me in the future! :)
          	
          	Becky x 

sunshineebb

Fix your grammar.

sunshineebb

@crazybunny23 Nope, it's pretty nice weather over here. Well thank you for taking your time to read my comment and reply to it. Hopefully, you can get her to do the same thing.
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sunshineebb

@crazybunny23 No, she did not correct her grammar and I would offer my help, but I believe that would be offensive to the writer. It's easy to correct a few errors in order for the story to have an easy flow and have sense into it. Also, using correct terms for body parts would be amazing too. I am from Los Angeles, California. How about you?
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sunshineebb

@crazybunny23  I rather not sugar code things. It's better to be direct, it makes people accomplish things faster. I am grateful for such enlighten advice, I truly appreciate it.
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