@Ligmaballscuh
Yo, can you read my story elements 12? I want opinions so I can improve
https://www.wattpad.com/story/395932837?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=Theiconicstoryteller
@Ligmaballscuh hello! Which chapter are you on of elements 12 currently urrently
Here since I have too much free time
The summoning smoke cleared, but instead of a giant toad, Kakashi Hatake stared down at a small, pink, perfectly spherical creature. It had large, soulful eyes and stubby arms that waved enthusiastically.
"Poyo!" you chirped, tilting your head.
The Genin of Team 7 were speechless. Sakura looked confused, Sasuke looked insulted, and Naruto—well, Naruto looked like he’d found a kindred spirit.
"What is that? A sentient mochi?" Sasuke scoffed, reaching for a kunai.
Before he could blink, you opened your mouth. A localized hurricane erupted. The air hissed as Sasuke’s kunai was vacuumed into your endless maw. With a satisfied gulp, you glowed white. A tiny, identical version of Sasuke’s forehead protector materialized on your brow, and a miniature wooden sword appeared in your hand.
"He… he just ate the jutsu?" Kakashi muttered, his lone eye widening.
Your first real test came during the Chunin Exams. When Orochimaru’s giant snake lunged, you didn't flinch. You inhaled the beast’s fire breath, transformed into a fiery supernova, and rolled through the forest like a literal wrecking ball. The Forest of Death became your buffet.
By the time the Akatsuki arrived, the "Pink Demon of the Leaf" was a legend. Pain launched an Almighty Push, only for you to suck the kinetic energy right out of the sky. You didn't care about the cycle of hatred or the destiny of the shinobi; you just wanted to know if the Nine-Tails tasted like orange sherbet.
Naruto grinned, bumping his fist against your soft, rubbery hand. "You're the best teammate ever, (Y/N)!"
You nodded solemnly, then proceeded to inhale Naruto’s entire bowl of Ichiraku Ramen in a single go.
"Poyo!"
I low-key plan on doing a mahoraga fiction one day
yo that dismantle was cold yo yo
Yo check out my new story
https://www.wattpad.com/story/409878046