LilDivaxoxo

Hi Everyone. I just posted a short story that I wrote for English at school. Could you please check it out and give me some feedback (please point out any errors as well!) 
          
          Thanks 
          LilDiva xoxo

Gahhh your profile pic is perfection :*. 
          
           lots of love
          
          your husband xx 

Thanks for all the votes :) XD

@2004kermit All good 

@LilDivaxoxo thanks for reading Candyfloss

@Buster2002131941 Because I'm reading your book and it's really good

but why did you follow me

thank you for following

@LilDivaxoxo
          Thanks for the nice comments :)  Love your support xx

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