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@Dianison no problem

@athinablain same to you and your family ...keep on writing

I already saw your works...grabeh huh ang dami na pala... I may not understand story basis but I love your determination... keep writing huh! I will wait for your updates :)  

@XxRozxX9 hello! :D 

@Hawkeye_Royai Hello! Nabasa ko na pala Virgin's Curse ... I just would like to give an honest critism thou I'm not a professional writer nor finished any stories... I would like to give an advise when it comes on constructing your stories... Maganda yung concept mo ... and plot pero mabuti kung pag-iisipan natin yung laman o yung process o development ng stories... Bilang reader napapansin ko yung mga updates na medyo sabaw pero naiintindihan ko naman yun kasi mahirap talagang gumawa ng story o ng events ...  siguro yung masasabi ko na lang eh kung gagawa ka ng story maybe try to imagine it na ginagawa nang movie... like if you would be the director of that story aalisin mo yung mga scenes na wala masyadong laman para tipid sa budget... its better din to develop your characters by adding chapters para mas makilala pa yung characters... so yun hihihi pasensya ka na ... kung ang dami ko nasabi hihihihi... gusto ko lang sana makatulong :) ... keep writing! I admire your determination! Be an inspiration to other writers and silent readers... thank you!:)

@Hawkeye_Royai  yap! Feby:)

@Hawkeye_Royai febie,right?hehehe