As said before in the previous comment, your writing is beautiful. At first, I just wanted to read a wholesome brother and sister story, but after the third chapter, I had to take a few minutes and really appreciate your writing. It’s insanely touching, and I was really impressed. Normally, I tend to read stories with over a million reads because most of the time those are the only readable stories on this app. But you are by far one of the best writers I have encountered on this app. Keep it up, and I hope you will publish some of your work; it’s worth it.