Lil_Lilith

@_TommoPrincess_ And don't you dare say that! You are good 
          	You have good grammar, you are keeping the readers alert, confused, entretained and that you're enjoying writing the book and for me thats what matter in a book 

Lil_Lilith

@_TommoPrincess_ 
          I strated to read it yesterday 
          I absolutaly fell in love with the cover of the book and chapters, it made laugh big time and believe it or not every chapter made me forget i was upset. If you like writing why don't you try it again? I'm going to be here and other more readers. I'm usually the imvisible reader that don't comment unless i really like what i'm reading a nd teust me i like how you write 
          You have talent. Don't try to stop what you like to do :3