Lil_Shadow04

Sometime today I will be posting a short story I wrote a couple days ago, it hasn't been edited so there may be some errors. I wrote the story with very strong emotion, to the point where I'm had to take a break from writing it so that I would not cry. I'd like some feedback on it, if u like tge story share it with ur friends, I could use they're feedback as well. 

Lil_Shadow04

Sometime today I will be posting a short story I wrote a couple days ago, it hasn't been edited so there may be some errors. I wrote the story with very strong emotion, to the point where I'm had to take a break from writing it so that I would not cry. I'd like some feedback on it, if u like tge story share it with ur friends, I could use they're feedback as well.