Random_QueenNerd

Hey you! Thank you so much for voting for Lace. I hope that you enjoyed reading it as much as I enjoyed writing it. 
          
          Much love
          ~Virgo.

LiliArrow

Erebus, of course.
            And Riley offering information on Lacey... shady...
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Random_QueenNerd

@LiliArrow fml, I'm a few more chapters you'll be even more torn. But in the end, Lace will end up with the person that she deserves. I'm curious tho, who do you ship?
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LiliArrow

Hi Virgo relax Lace is a good story
            Cannot give advic tho
            Just curious how it'll go... Riley or Erebus? (Riley is the past, Erebus is more for the new Lace but still...)
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DariaLamtsova

Hi Lili,
          Thank you for reading and voting  on my Dylan Pratt series. 
          
          Since we once already discussed Book one, I'd be happy to hear from you about your impressions of Book two, and any feedback, feelings and recommendations. I appreciate you as my loyal reader, and would like to know your opinion about anything story connected before I start to edit it all.
          
          Hope to hear from you.
          Hugs.

DariaLamtsova

@LiliArrow sent via DM=)
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DariaLamtsova

@LiliArrow Thank you, Lili!
            I'm glad you found characters relatable, and HUGE thanks for pointing at the forgiveness issue. 
            I actually felt that I failed to deliver Dylan's feelings as he never forgave Sam, but he realised he couldn't hate him either, Sam was sick and to hate a sick person had not much sense for Dylan, besides he knew hatred wouldn't let him move further in life.
            Now, when you pointed at this weak side of the story, I took a small delay with the reply thinking over how to fix it. It seems I found the way how to edit it to show MC feelings better. Again thank you so much for pointing at it.
            As for  closure part, I know for sure that I missed one scene and I am going to put it in when editing, and generally I maybe will make it a little bit less fast paced, however, I do not want to extend it too much either. But since you mentioned it, I will definitely look into it again and give it a better thought.
            Thank you so much (*namaste gesture=))*) and sincere hugs)
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LiliArrow

oh and send me the Spotify link plz thanks!
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