@masahnzahara Hey, so i finished the chapter that are out. I think you did a great job at the perspectives, and the story has a clear storyline. It's not my personal favourite stile, but I still enjoy it. I give it a 8/10 because of some grammar errors like this written small after a point and because it's a bit to rushed for me. I liked the time skip, tilt was really good, but during the story it was a bit rushed from my perspective. But maybe it only my preferences. If someone likes this stile, it's definitely a 9.5/10.
