I would've replied to your comment, but I couldn't find it ^^"
Anyway, I think I understand where you're coming from. I had written that when I was still new to writing so it's not my best.
And I'm sorry too... I didn't mean to come off as rude, as I probably did. I was actually planning on rewriting it because, as I said, it's not my best. Thanks for the tips and I'll try to work on it!