Lilreader37

I just posted a new chapter of Perfect Little Angel! Please check it out. Also, I am always open to constructive criticism. ♡

Lilreader37

Please check this out! I am going to add more, but I really want some constructive criticism. Should I change the layout? Should I change any words? Did I misspell any words? Are you interested in reading more? I am new to sharing my stories online so I am expecting some mistakes. If you do happen to read this, do not hesitate to call them out!
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/230482861

Nico-1942

@Lilreader37 Yes, but each text should have a begining, middle, and end. Also a storyline to keep the reader wanting more.
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Lilreader37

@Nico-1942 Is it ok if I don't have a plot, but it is just a collection of stories and memories?
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Nico-1942

@37Lilly37 To keep readers intrested, always remember to have a driving plot line and to use descriptive words! Explain your characters fully, and use dialog to move your story along. I hope this helps! : )
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Lilreader37

Have you ever had the seed of a story and wanted to write it down. And when you start to write it down more and more comes to you. So that when there is a twist in the story you are writing it surprises even you? Only me? Ok. I guess it’s my way to tap the creativity inside me.