Lilspooky201

@Dstephen37 Hey man everything good?

Lilspooky201

@Dstephen37 Hey man I saw the new chapter for the question and I see you want one of the girls to be the baby momma
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Lilspooky201

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@Dstephen37 Wasn't expecting a new chapter of Brooklyn nine nine but great work nonetheless. And Melissa really just said fuck it you can have the kid. I'm kinda hoping for more bad luck for her even though she's gone
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Lilspooky201

@Dstephen37 I get what you're saying 
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Dstephen37

I don't want to pester you but I updated the docs again.
          
          I would love to hear your opinion soon because I want to upload it on Monday.

Lilspooky201

@Dstephen37 That's actually pretty good and I can see Shelly doing that
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Dstephen37

@Lilspooky201 I had an idea for how Y/N and Shelly get together.
            
            Do you know how when they did that whole girlfriend challenge?
            
            I feel like I should do that to set it up.
            
            I like the idea that Shelly would make whoever the date was kind of struggle to match with her. 
            
            I mean she would have high standards and plus I feel like she would reject the idea of a dating website because if she goes on there she will just get a ton of matches because of her appearance
            
            So if she does go on a date she wants it to be the perfect option.
            
            I feel like Y/N who doesn't know that its Shelly on the other side can just go through with it after pestering from Howard and Raj.
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Lilspooky201

@Dstephen37 Yeah that's the one I just can't remember the name
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Dstephen37

Hey man, how have you been?
          
          We haven't really messaged in a while.
          
          I have a question, about the new Big Bang Theory story.
          
          I got half of the pilot done, and I need someone to proofread it, if you don't want to, it's fine, I really want someone else's perspective as I'm kind of nervous about this and want it to go well.
          
          https://docs.google.com/document/d/1r7uJETN1PAy5nFHu21NPF1OOJiLBv-014irycYJzXw4/edit?usp=sharinghttps://docs.google.com/document/d/1r7uJETN1PAy5nFHu21NPF1OOJiLBv-014irycYJzXw4/edit?usp=sharing
          
          I feel like, as a reader, you guys probably want this story to be different, so I'm leaning toward A, but there is comfort in familiarity so maybe B.
          
          I don't know, it's why I need someone's else perspective.

Dstephen37

@Lilspooky201 Yeah. But you kind of get my point. I mean like the subtle differences.
            
            I think a flashback there could be good, like Mary has them dress the same and Y/N could notice she was Shelly.
            
            
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Lilspooky201

@Dstephen37 Also with Y/N telling the difference between Shelly and Missy is it that hard to tell them apart. I mean with watching the show and seeing how Missy looks it would be assumed that Shelly is protested by Missy's actress she'll look like her but probably won't dress the same way Missy does
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Dstephen37

@Lilspooky201 I added the final bit to the first chapter, let me know what you think.
            
            I kind of explained why Howard doesn't flirt with Shelly, because of the degradation thing, I think linking how Sheldon normally feels about mechanics could be a good way to say Howard is not interested.
            
            The Raj thing though, I kind of set up.
            
            Let me know, I kind of want to release the first chapter on Monday for that whole Christmas thing I'm doing this year.
            
            Thank you.
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Dstephen37

I added a sixth chapter to the Flash doc, if you want to read it.
          
          Also, have you read my big bang theory story?
          
          I'm asking because I'm making a Fem Sheldon story and I would like someone to proofread it for me.

Dstephen37

@Lilspooky201 i added a ton of chapters to the flash doc if you want to check it out.
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Dstephen37

@Lilspooky201 Thanks for reading the Flash story.
            
            I'm probably going to be lazy and call her Shelly because I can't think of anything else.
            
            I'll probably just use Courtney Hengeller( Missy's adult actress)
            
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Lilspooky201

@Dstephen37 Cool I'll give it a read. I read the fifth chapter and it was good. Yeah I've read your big bang theory story and I'll proofread for you. Also, question for the fem Sheldon story what's gonna be her name and who do you think can portray a female Sheldon 
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Dstephen37

Quick question would you be interested in a Flash Wanda story set in Marvel? 
          
          

Lilspooky201

@Dstephen37 Cool I'll give it a read
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Dstephen37

@Lilspooky201 Thanks. There's a fifth part if you want to read that.
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Lilspooky201

@Dstephen37 Hey man I read the fourth part and it was a pretty good introduction of Wanda.
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Dstephen37

I saw your request, and I'm kind of intrigued to write a Tilly story.
          
          But what do you want to see from the story?
          
          
          
          On an unrelated note, it's my idea is to either 
          
          A) Write the one-shot as a pilot of sorts for stories I want to write in the future 
          
          B) Maybe write it as a short story like three or four chapters as a way I don't have to make new stories every time 
          
          C) Just be a One-shot.
          
          
          
          

Lilspooky201

@Dstephen37 Yeah man I completely understand you. It can be like that sometimes and the boys are really annoying but when I read the comments it's usually one or two but at least it isn't bad like how it is on YouTube. But you got a lot of people that love reading your stories and sometimes they'll post a comment or not. 
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Dstephen37

@Lilspooky201 I could do something like that,  maybe when John is in Saint Denis he meets Y/N and Charles.
            
            Also, I've been up and down to be completely honest with you. It's a thing where there are so many bots on here that will go to like my most recent chapter and try to sell their art and it makes it feel like there aren't real people reading my stuff.
            
            I know it's an overexaggeration but sometimes it just feels like I'm writing stuff to myself.
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Lilspooky201

@Dstephen37 But hey how have you been man? I know you haven't been updating that much which is not a problem cause we all got things to do in life where we just don't have time to do the things we want to do.
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DreadMaximus

Also, if you saw "ChatGPT said", it's because I had my guideline there and forgot to delete that. I was discussing some lore and I used some of our conversation as a guideline. So no biggie. It's about monarchia and its religion. It's mostly my conversation, which I used as a guideline.

Lilspooky201

@DreadMaximus Got it thanks for clearing that up and great work in the new chapter too.
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Dstephen37

Quick thing, are you going to read the Shameless Fanfic when it comes out?
          
          Because if you are here, would you mind proofreading two chapters for me?

Lilspooky201

@Dstephen37 Well all I can say is that it's a great start
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Dstephen37

@Lilspooky201 I might keep the first person perspective, I'll probably do a poll or something. 
            
            I'm going to make the new story start on the first of September.
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Lilspooky201

@Dstephen37 Okay I just got done reading it and I liked it. I liked the first person perspective.
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Dstephen37

I was thinking about the Boys story, and I'm going to wait till after Y/N sleeps with Freya before he finds out about Freya.
          
          I think Freya should be pissed and refuse to speak to him because Y/N has told her that he is impotent. 
          
          She could not speak to him, and it would mean somebody has to speak to her (I'm thinking Maeve, Kimiko is mute and Victoria is worried about Zoe)
          
          Maeve will tell Freya that Y/N genuinely believes he is impotent because he was told so, then Freya will forgive Y/N but it doesn't change the fact she doesn't want the child.
          
          Maeve will tell Y/N.
          
          And then Y/N will have to deal with the fact, he has been lied to for years.
          
          Maeve knowing Zoe needed help, decided to speak to the one person she knows had a supe child in Victoria.
          
          Victoria will tell Freya that there is no precaution that can get rid of the child.
          
          Sentry will have found out that he was already a dad, and flew to Freya, where Freya is contemplating jumping off the bridge because she doesn't want to mother Sentry's child.
          
          Y/N and Freya will talk as Y/N promises her he will make sure nothing ever happens to her, and this is where he tells her he loves her (this is the first time he tells one of the harem woman he loves them) Freya comes down, as the two settle before Y/N has to go see Victoria.
          
          Where he tells Victoria he knows. 
          
          And Sentry will say something like "You're lucky I still love you, or you would be dead already" or "You're lucky Zoe needs you"
          
          I like the love one more, but I think Zoe should be mentioned in some capacity.
          
          I think that's when Season One ends.
          
          And then Season Two is about Victoria trying to win Y/N back, Y/N's relationship with Freya, the redemption of Sentry, actually being a father, his relationship with Maeve and Kimiko.
          
          Also, I feel Y/N's supe dog should be more like Zoe's supe dog because it could be like how Krypto was in Superman. Just being a nuisance to Y/N who can't do anything because Zoe will be mad at him, and he doesn't want that.

Lilspooky201

@Dstephen37 But also them not knowing anything about their son would make them want to be closer to him than for them adopting another child
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Lilspooky201

@Dstephen37 I mean I like that his moms don't know that much about him and when they learn more about him that's when they know they're not being good parents and that's when his moms decide that spending time with their son is more important.Also can I ask a favor and it's about his moms can you at least have them discuss them wanting to adopt another child after they spend more time with him and it can't be just a short time cause they missed a lot of stuff  in their sons life and Seb will be hesitant but agree with the adoption. I just find it important that parents talk to their kids first before making these big decisions 
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Dstephen37

@Lilspooky201 Yeah, pretty much, I think that's why they want to get closer.
            
            I mean at the start once his parents adopt the kid, Seb wouldn't be sure about them, as he doesn't want a sibling so he tries to distance himself from them, but the kid won't leave him alone. 
            
            Wanting to go to his room, wanting to sleep on his bed, wanting to do things together, unaware of the fact that Sebastian doesn't want to spend time near the kid.
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Lilspooky201

@Dstephen37 Hey man everything good?

Lilspooky201

@Dstephen37 Hey man I saw the new chapter for the question and I see you want one of the girls to be the baby momma
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Lilspooky201

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@Dstephen37 Wasn't expecting a new chapter of Brooklyn nine nine but great work nonetheless. And Melissa really just said fuck it you can have the kid. I'm kinda hoping for more bad luck for her even though she's gone
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Lilspooky201

@Dstephen37 I get what you're saying 
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Dstephen37

Also, what are you thinking about the Boys story?

Lilspooky201

@Dstephen37 I see you started voting for the throuple. I ain't gonna lie Rihanna and Selena in a relationship with Y/N is interesting. Especially with Rihanna being a LeBron James fan and Selena being a Spurs fan
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Lilspooky201

@Dstephen37 One thing I'm gonna miss is Y/N being a center but if him being a small forward makes things easier for you then I'm down for it
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Lilspooky201

@Dstephen37 Hey man I accidentally deleted your comment I didn't know I could do that but from the looks of it Rihanna has 5 votes and Selena has 3 votes as of right now
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