Lilspooky201

@Dstephen37 I did and I enjoyed it

@Lilspooky201 Bo-Katan in a terrorist group. Surely not. I mean where would they hide on Mandalore's moon Concordia? Nah can't happen. Next you're going to tell me this so called terrorist group is called something like Death Watch. Though that would be ridiculous.

@Lilspooky201 So do I. I look forward to writing their future interactions.

@KancettoKryze Yeah I liked the conversation they had especially with Bo talking about her brother's role in the Republic military especially with him being a Jedi but I'm looking forward to seeing them interacting in the future 

@Dstephen37 I've been enjoying it 

@Lilspooky201 I haven't gotten to ask, how are you enjoying the Arrow story so far?

@Dstephen37 Well she's gonna be in for a surprise when the person who's been training her was her father all along.

@Dstephen37 Pretty good so far 

@Lilspooky201 
            
            Rosa: And I say you're getting a daugher battle ax, say if someone does come to the house when you're not there at least there's some line of defence. I think every girl should have a battle ax.
            
            Y/N: Does it to be have a battle ax?
            
            Rosa: As long as there is a weapon nearby, I feel like it's fine.
            
            Y/N: Okay, that aside, instead of thinking about as the first line of defence, most kids want ponies or dolls.
            
            Rosa: Gifts are supposed to be practical. Ponies are illogical. High maintenance, prone to biting. Dolls are just creepy miniature humans staring blankly into your soul. Both are the opposite of practical.
            
            Y/N: I pity your childhood. So, no love for teddy bears either?
            
            Rosa sighed, finally turning back to the body.
            
            Rosa: Teddy bears are flammable. A liability.
            
            Y/N: You know. I think I'm starting to understand why everyone's so terrified of you.
            
            Y/N: You look for the worst, like you never had a dog, you must have had something.
            
            Rosa: I don't want a stupid pet.
            
            Y/N: So for your birthdays, you still only get battle ax's and weapons?
            
            Rosa: Are you trying to distract me from my job?
            
            Y/N: Maybe a little. This is open and shut, there is only one witness and it's some blind grandma.
            
            Y/N: If she's blind she couldn't have the shot, because the shot was taken from at least fifteen feet away.
            
            Rosa: Go interview the blind woman, see if she saw anything.
            
            Y/N: I don't think she saw anything.
            
            Rosa: Check if she heard anything or I'll show you what a battle axe can really do.
            
            Y/N held up his hands in mock surrender.
            
            Y/N: Alright, alright, focus. Eyes on the prize. No more childhood trauma talk.
            
            
            I like this a lot, because it sets up, a lot of things, as I feel like it expands a lot.
            
            Obviously, I'm going to add more of them actually investigating into the talk, but this is just like the base of the scene.

@Lilspooky201 This is what I got so far. I had to split into two, to send it.
            
            
            
            At a crime scene, they were investigating a murder that had taken place behind a music store.
            
            
            
            Y/N: Rosa, when you were six, what did you want for your birthday? 
            
             Rosa didn't respond. 
            
             Y/N: Silence, a very odd gift for a child. 
            
             Rosa: I thought we had an agreement. 
            
             Y/N: What agreement? 
            
             Rosa: We don't ask each other personal questions.
            
            Y/N: When was that a thing?
            
            Rosa: For years, it's why I prefer working with you.
            
            Y/N: Oh, I thought you hated me.
            
            Rosa: Well, I hate you less than everyone else.
            
            Y/N: I think that's the nicest thing anyone ever said to me.
            
            Rosa: I know the company you keep, it's not stiff competition.
            
            
            
            
            Rosa: Why are you asking about my childhood? 
            
            Y/N: What you think I'm dirty?
            
            Rosa: Didn't say that.
            
            Y/N: I just want insight, and Reina's birthday party is this weekend. 
            
             Rosa: And you're going? 
            
             Y/N: Kind of have to. 
            
             Rosa: If I had an ex, I would make sure I never saw them again. 
            
             Y/N: Yeah, but when you have a kid together, it's different. 
            
             Rosa: I never want kids.
            
            
            Show Rosa explaining why she didn't want kids.
            
            Y/N: Honestly, I agree having your own one is different.
            
            Have Rosa explain why she didn't want her own ones, as she didn't want to go through that stuff.
            
            Y/N: Very fascinating take. Doesn't answer my question though.
            
            Rosa: A battle axe.
            
            Y/N: Okay, okay. What about a normal six-year-old?
            
            Rosa: I was a normal six year old once.
            
            Y/N: What did someone tighten your hair up to tight in ballet?
            
            Rosa: I never did ballet.
            
            Y/N: I doubt it.
            
            Rosa: You really think I would do ballet?
            
            Y/N: That or gymnastics or your doing yoga now, you're way too flexible.
            
            Rosa: You're wrong, I do none of those things.

@Dstephen37 I like and this would be something Y/N would do

@Lilspooky201 Could you check out the thing above?
            
            Also, I uploaded the most recent chapter, and there's A/N there, that I think adds to the story in a good way similar to NBA 2k with adding choices pretty much.

@Lilspooky201 Also, I was thinking about the NBA finals, do you want to see him put pressure on Golden State?
            
            Like say before Game Five, he goes into the Golden State locker room, he could either say like when we're back in New York (whatever day of the week it is) I got them to book your hotel already. I feel he could just apply pressure on them, you guys can't guard me tonight, I'm going for sixty, you guys come back to New York and we ain't losing to a lose elimination game in New York, and then we're back here, you guys got to win tonight if you don't it's looking scary.
            
            I feel like that could make them commit silly fouls on Y/N in Game Five as there's no Draymond.
            
            Or something like it's going to be a long night for you guys (I think this fits better before Game Six)
            
            What do you think?

@Lilspooky201 Also should I do the first kiss now?
            
            I think it makes sense as she could say the thing and he's like uh.
            
            And Haley could be like "I just confessed to you and all I got was uh" 
            
            And then Sebastian kisses her as then it's like that's his answer.

@Dstephen37 Yeah I agree. I say go for it 

@Lilspooky201 Hear me out I was thinking I think I should just have Haley confess.
            
            And then that's it as I feel like they just should be boyfriend and girlfriend because I've always felt like Haley needed to be one to confess.

@Lilspooky201 Also, how about I have the other daughter of Sentry break her out?
            
            
            Lara seemed to register the security guards for the first time, her eyes widening in a fresh wave of panic. "No! Don't let them take me! They know! They know I know!" She started to struggle, her reedy voice rising to a frantic shriek. "He's my son! My Y/N! They're lying to you, Maeve! All of them!"
            
            The security guard wasted no time. With a practiced, efficient movement, he grabbed Lara's arm, his partner moving to flank her. "Ma'am, you need to step away from the building."
            
            Lara fought back, a surprisingly fierce, though ultimately futile, struggle. Her desperate cries echoed in the polished foyer. "No! Let me go! Maeve! He needs me! My son! He's trapped!" Her pleas were heart-wrenching, if entirely unconvincing to Maeve’s ears.
            
            
            Like what if they take her you know to like kill her for trying to unveil the truth, but then she gets broken out by none other than his daughter.

@Lilspooky201 Also, hear me out, what if he was kind of calm at first? And then when they tried to take him from his mother that's when he went rampaging.
            
            I think that is more interesting while also making the mother's story seem even more unbelievable (I need to make her story seem ridiculous and a baby barely out of the woman defending it's mother just seems the way to do that)

@Lilspooky201 Also, I think I should have interact with Queen Maeve before I set all this up.
            
            Like because Y/N is 'missing' she has to patrol alone, as Sentry can't fly her back, she meets the woman, and that she does the whole, I'm his mother thing and she doesn't believe him.
            
            Also, should I have her bring up Soldier Boy or no?
            
            I think the Soldier boy thing is too on the nose, but for a delusional woman, I think it makes sense she just says it as it only makes the others not believe her.

@Lilspooky201 Yeah. But you kind of get my point. I mean like the subtle differences.
            
            I think a flashback there could be good, like Mary has them dress the same and Y/N could notice she was Shelly.
            
            

@Dstephen37 Also with Y/N telling the difference between Shelly and Missy is it that hard to tell them apart. I mean with watching the show and seeing how Missy looks it would be assumed that Shelly is protested by Missy's actress she'll look like her but probably won't dress the same way Missy does

@Lilspooky201 I added the final bit to the first chapter, let me know what you think.
            
            I kind of explained why Howard doesn't flirt with Shelly, because of the degradation thing, I think linking how Sheldon normally feels about mechanics could be a good way to say Howard is not interested.
            
            The Raj thing though, I kind of set up.
            
            Let me know, I kind of want to release the first chapter on Monday for that whole Christmas thing I'm doing this year.
            
            Thank you.

@Lilspooky201 i added a ton of chapters to the flash doc if you want to check it out.

@Lilspooky201 Thanks for reading the Flash story.
            
            I'm probably going to be lazy and call her Shelly because I can't think of anything else.
            
            I'll probably just use Courtney Hengeller( Missy's adult actress)
            

@Dstephen37 Cool I'll give it a read. I read the fifth chapter and it was good. Yeah I've read your big bang theory story and I'll proofread for you. Also, question for the fem Sheldon story what's gonna be her name and who do you think can portray a female Sheldon 

@Dstephen37 Cool I'll give it a read

@Lilspooky201 Thanks. There's a fifth part if you want to read that.

@Dstephen37 Hey man I read the fourth part and it was a pretty good introduction of Wanda.