LilyItalia

A book got taken down while I was reading it grrrrrrrr.

ElishaVarren

Apologies for popping into your message board—feel free to delete this after, but I had to share!
          I just dropped a brand new cowboy romance and couldn’t keep it to myself.
          She came to Texas for a wedding… not to fall for her boyfriend’s dad.
          Lies. Lust. Lines crossed.
          If messy love triangles, forbidden chemistry, and older cowboys are your thing—this one’s for you.
          Chapter 3 is out now—come meet Draven and Rhett. One might steal her heart… the other might break it.
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/394480777?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=ElishaVarren

SophiaDelphine92

Thank you so much for all  of your votes for Mates with Triplets, I appreciate your support!  Feel free to comment and let me know what you think, I love getting other people's perspectives.
          
          You may like some of my other stories as well, like Mates with Three Giant Beasts, Witch's Brew, Vengeance  and Retribution, When we Were in the Before Times, Painful Epiphanies, the Tasting Room, Vampire Vendetta and the Unwanted Mate.
          
          For the latest news and updates, make sure to follow me.
          
          Stay safe and have a great day hon! ♥️♥️♥️

Kitsuneume

Thank you so much for giving me my first star here.  I really appreciate it greatly.  I hope my first attempt at writing a story was ok.

Kitsuneume

Hi @LilyItalia Thank you so much for adding my story to your good reads list:) I am still working on finishing my story to enter the contest, Thorny Tales, I have been struggling over a chapter for last two days but I know how I want to end last chapter, so it’s just a case of navigating there!  Thank you so much again:)
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Kitsuneume

Thank you for your advice, I will edit it after the next awards.  I am working on a new entry for 2021.  I am trying to do what you said about perspectives in this story.  Afterwards I was hoping to continue the sequel to the one you read.  I can refresh my memory when I go over it again.  I already had a rough outline for how the next part was going to be like.  Thank you once again.
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LilyItalia

Of course! I really like the story! You have a great imagination! One note: have you thought about making this several chapters instead of only one and maybe marking where the narration or point of view changes? Just a thought. The story is really good!
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