Elieen_Calara_
Hey!
So, one thing I noticed is that your story might be missing some key elements that really help catch a reader’s eye like an attractive cover, character illustrations, or some visual touches. These small things can really make a big difference and pull people into your story more easily!
LilyVinson21
@Elieen_Calara_ Yes! I did realize that. Kinda why I created the "in the mind of the author" series. It has the family tree, map, and character profiles. Once, I finish the book I think I'll start fleshing out more illustrations. If that makes sense? Thank you for your feedback!