LilyWings

Chapter 1st of this book. Seriously this was the longest chapter I've ever written. 
          	I just published "Chapter 1 Adjusting in new life" of my story "Lily's adventures as Lila Rossi". https://www.wattpad.com/1516324211?utm_source=android&utm_medium=profile&utm_content=share_published&wp_page=create_on_publish&wp_uname=LilyWings

smurfetteandroses

I loved chapter 2 in Lily’s adventures as Lila Rossi! Especially the interaction between Adrien and lily it was so genuine the connection they shared in that moment if you know what I mean. Just from that alone I believe those two would have a cute friendship that could turn into something more which I think would be great. Adrien’s my favorite character so I’m always rooting for him lol and I think the kind of character your protagonist portrays would be good for Adrien.

smurfetteandroses

I really can’t wait to see what you come up with next!! I’m looking forward to the next chapter.
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LilyWings

@smurfetteandroses I really like your review your put your thoughts and opinions in a very sweet way, and yeah I want to go through that way, all the way to friends-to-lovers trope, especially who will help Adrien in the long way
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LilyWings

@smurfetteandroses Adrien is my favorite character too and that boy deserves everything nice especially after how the writers treat that poor guy. When the topic of relationship came in my mind, I just wanted to approach a healthier way for them, I wanted Adrien to finally have someone in his corner who actually like him for being him, and is ready to accept him with his faults and all
            Adrien and Marinette both put each other on a high pedestal, and it is really a negative way for a relationship especially on a higher end of road, I wanted something nice and genuine for them, that yeah healthy relationships exists and we like it that way
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ShortyWolf20

Thanks for adding grim to ur reading list!

LilyWings

@ShortyWolf20 I had really enjoyed reading the prologue of grim and I can't wait to read all of them. Just the first chapter was nice and intriguing and I believe rest of the chapters will be same. Keep it up it's better than I had imagined
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LilyWings

@ShortyWolf20 no problem I would have done it sooner but my exams were finished a little later than I had expected and I read the prologue and I have to say it was awesome
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