Lily_kim-0
@rose2q4e it's alright
rose2q4e
Gentle Reader,
How about giving a moment of yours to read my first ever story.
I truly appreciate the feedback and suggestions of yours.
Thank you.
https://www.wattpad.com/story/377116417?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=rose2q4e
dreemforyou
@Lily_kim-0 it's ok,
dreemforyou
@Lily_kim-0 I'm glad if you make taennie ff,, I would like to read ur taennie story
Dr_Dreyma-Vask
Hey sis! I saw you offered to let me read your story, and I gotta admit, I haven't dove in deep yet. But I've definitely taken a peek! Now, I'm not a super experienced author myself, but as a reader, I'd suggest adding some structure to your writing. Don't worry, it's just a thought, no pressure! But I really think using paragraphs will make your story engaging and feel more attractive and stable for readers. When you use dialogue all the time, it can feel a bit shaky and less engaging. So, my advice? Go for those paragraphs! I know some people love stories with lots of dialogue, but I personally find that paragraphs make it easier to get lost in the story. It's just a thought, though! If you want any advice or something I'm here anytime.
Thanks for sharing, and good luck with all your future writing adventures! You've got this!
Lily_kim-0
@yabu_kim actually I'm sorry that I'm giving late reply. I was quite busy. But thank you for your time you have gave me and thank you so much for your advice and I'm really grateful for that and I think I'm going to apply the things that you have said me and I'm really grateful and thank you so much
dreemforyou
I really like ur story
adrina_lee-0
yoo girlll..!!<<<