Iloveharrypotter11
Hello! So I took your words into consideration and thought that you were right about the plot going too fast! I made some changes and unpublished two chapters to edit them first! Thanks for the help!
Iloveharrypotter11
Hello! I was wondering if you would like to check out my story!! Happy month!!!!
Iloveharrypotter11
@Iloveharrypotter11 Thank you so much! I would love to hear any suggestions or comments about my writing!