I just reached the end of chapter 11 and saw you were looking for beta readers. I realise I am late to the posting but thought it worth asking.
I was an English major, (quit before a degree). Have done some editing, though nothing of a professional nature. Rapid reader, love research, (depending on topic), loads of time. I have posted a few bits on Watt under dzeijz though ff. If I can be of help, fantastic. If not, I still look forward to reading more of your stories. d