Linathebean

My first fan fic! It's definitely a little rough around the edges but I hope you enjoy the plot and the character! https://www.wattpad.com/story/156819563

MoonBloomm

Hello, I'm not trying to be annoying and if you ignore this then it is totally fine but I have started to write a fanfic and would like an opinion from a really good author as to wether I should continue it or ditch the whole plot. If you want to invite this then that's fine. Also thank you so much for following me it means so much. Bye xx

Linathebean

@MoonFoxMin hey! So I checked our your story and I love the storyline it's very interesting. I feel like the only thing  I would change are the minor grammar mistakes. But other than that it's good! I personally, am somebody who loves plot twists, so just remember to throw in some twists every now and then. And the last thing I would say is write from knowing. Like try and keep it realistic. Like if a character is feeling an emotion. Try and stay in the emotion for a little while. Does that make sense? Idk. But just be clear and descriptive on what's going on in the characters mind when x happens so that the readers can relate well. (Obviously anima's aren't realistic but that's not what I mean) I really love the story and I am also not a professional so don't take anything I say too seriously. They're all just suggestions that you don't need to listen to if you don't want to. I really love the plot and the idea of incorporating foxes into the story. Very interesting choice. Thanks again for thinking that I am good enough to give you advice it really means a lot. <3
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MoonBloomm

Thank you so much, you have no idea how much this means
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Linathebean

@MoonFoxMin of course! I am honored that you choose to come to me for advice! I will go check it out!
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