_555lambofnocturne_

Heya! ^^ Thought I’d check up just to hear your ideas for that rewrite I was doing!

_555lambofnocturne_

Of course! Always happy to lend a hand!
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Linzeemichelle97

@_555lambofnocturne_  that makes sense!  I will let you know if I have any other ideas! And let me know if you have any for mine!
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_555lambofnocturne_

I definitely would write it that way—though I think I would write Trevor’s repressed sexuality in terms of intimacy in many forms, rather than orientation (mainly because I feel like the coming-out thing is getting too predictable now). Say his parents wanted him to remain that golden boy and date someone who’s “respectable” (regardless of gender) and keep him in that purity cage.
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