@LionelloCosi
I know I posted my first review today but all following reviews will be posted every Friday evening. This will give me plenty of time to read the book of my - or your - choice and stew on my thoughts. I'm sure my critique style will evolve and be refined as I go along. But I think it's really important that good books get noticed and acknowledged.
If you want me to read your book and leave a review on my page, feel free to send it to me. I will be fair but I will also be honest. If I don't like I will say so, but will also give my reasons why. If I loved it I will also say so and leave glowing reviews where you request. Happy reading!
Okay, my first review. Divine Charity by J.A. Price. I'm choosing this one because it was this book that brought me to wattpad, since it was written by a personal friend of mine. Since it was my first read, it only makes sense to make it my first review. So, without spoilers, here it goes...
Divine Charity, is a bit of a long read. Not any longer than most on WattPad but it did take me a while to read it as I started reading before it was completed. If you want a strong female lead and mouth watering male with just enough alpha to excite you and poeticism to make you swoon, this is the book for you. There were only like two scenes that seemed to drag but they were important to the plot so I was able to power through. This book is pretty well edited, hardly any spelling mistakes at all, grammar was mouth-watering good, and the characters were actually likeable. (Even if I DID want to kick Camael's ass when he...nevermind...no spoilers... but there is a scene where you will get angry at the male MC and want Lena kick his ass to the curb.) The author did a good job of making you understand what motivated each character, and each character has enough depth to make the reader root for everyone. I don't think I found any plot holes except for one, but I was reassured by the author that, that lot hole was done purposely and will be addressed in book two. Anyway, by the end of the book you feel satisfied with the end result. Oh! The way Camael professes his love for Lena will legit make you teary-eyed. And I'm a dude, true, a gay dude but still a dude. Anyway, Divine Charity could use a bit more editing but nothing too overt. Her only real problem with punctuation seems to be with her damned commas lol. Anyway, good read. If you like sci-fi with a touch of the divine. If you have any books you would like me to review and leave my honest thoughts on, go ahead and message me or tag more or however it works on here. Happy reading my friends.
I'm going to start critiquing the books I read on here. If you want to know what I think of your stories, just ask, I will read the whole thing and give my honest thoughts here on my page. First critique will come out tomorrow.
I'm going to be that a$$hole. If your book sucks, I'm just going to tell you and if your book ends up in one of my libraries it's because you are at least a half-way good writer. Its ridiculous the amount of trash that is on this site.
Why is it so hard to find actual talent on this site? Most of these stories are terribly written. I've yet to find one with good grammar, let alone punctuation.