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@Prine89irs ok

@Prine89irs yeah I'll probably read it when I have less homework

Have you read lion guard survival from death 

@Prine89irs I really loved it   and am disappointed  that that friendship is gone

@Prine89irs  hi, I just read it and am loving it, the beginnings of a sibling dynamic between the Jasiri etc and kion is great, the only thing I can think of is that you have kept on using the word "said" a lot, I don't mean it in a bad way but this could be better if you varied the word a little, also I am officially freaking out for kion and the guard with the fact people have the audacity to SUSPECT THEM honestly. A MAZE ING story

Yes, I understand the plot and what's going on.

@Prine89irs  its very good, now i am scared for what will happen next to the guard, but it would be better if you used the word said less

@Prine89irs oh ok

@Prine89irs the heist chapter is good but i feel like the outlanders would take longer, and next, i feel sorry for the pridelands

@Prine89irs Thaila is incredibly sneaky and an excellent character, I feel like he is not normal and somehow related to the gods intro bit, I would love to see more on his partnership with scar and if he will reveal himself properly