hey lipika! thank you so much for your advice and ideas for 'thieves can be angels'. i have made the necessary adjustments to my chapters, so hopefully they have improved. your feedback is very very very much appreciated, and I'm grateful that i got such an incredible buddy for the book club. I'm so sorry, my advice and suggestions are not as developed as yours, as i am a new writer! i really appreciate you, and thank you so much for your help. if you ever need anything, please don't hesitate to ask!