@LisaEllsworth0323 I'm LATE I just found your story!!!
I love the story!! it's so cute!!!
I like writing and planning, so if you want to talk!! I'm here~
for now I'll just throw out random ideas :3c
Since it's jimin centric...let's make it more of a slow burn~
builds tension~
But! tension doesn't have to come from jealousy!
The tension can come from uncertainty. Like, she's tiny. does jimin just like her cause she's tiny???
Concern about her own self worth.
The boys, they wouldn't even notice her if this strange thing didn't happen.
Self doubt, she's just a random fan!
thoughts like that will make the story more emotional driven!
But!
You could also add more to the plot overall. Make if more of a ...story story, ya'know?
Like, 'how' this happened. Why this happened.
The add conflict! like, yeah, you could just focus on the emotions, but! You could add something else, like a villian? maybe she get's kidnapped? Stuff like that.
Again, i love your story and hope you continue it one day~ i also recommend uploading it on other places, like quotev :3! Make's it easier to find as this website can be difficult to navigate~
