@Lisa_R_Baird
Will there be a sequel to "Just try it"?
@autonomousscholar I have sequels in mind, but haven't even started a first draft. it will be a while.
@autonomousscholar I actually have a couple more chapters. I haven't been working on it for a long time, but recently started the last bit of reviewing.
@brayden11111 Actually, it is very tame. I'm planning one make out scene, but most is relationship building. Nothing more than a slightly steamy make out session way into the story.
@Likereadingnow Posted. Sometimes I need the push. Thanks for encouraging me to keep going. Also found that I missed posting a chapter in Just Picture It. I have it ready, but I just have to figure out how to put it in the right spot. Should be back on track now.
Lisa, I really like this story...but your last few chapters of JPI have devolved into a "gods eye narrative" of what the characters are thinking/doing. My advice (from an author who messes up the narrative tenses all the time!!) is to just write the scenes and dialog form the character's perspective. Just write what they are saying and thinking, don't give the reader an eye in the sky perspective. I hope this helps...JC
@WillFlyForFood thanks. I'll check it out and strive to be more consistent. Appreciate the feedback.
Thank you for always reading and voting on Black Ghoul High! It means the world to me! The next chapter #1 Fashionista is up of you haven't read it yet!
@WillFlyForFood I accidentally had the synopsis in place before my chapters, and then deleted it. Maybe you were clicking on it just as I deleted it? It is good to start posting again.
Lisa,
I got this: Oops, story not found! When I click on the first (introduction?) chapter of the story.
FWIW, I have had some positive comments on having an introduction posted as the first chapter of all my books. I think that those who read ONLY on the phone can read the intro that way.
And congrats on publishing the new project, I'm excited to see where this goes.
JC
Thanks. I fixed it, finally. I should have looked at it closer before posting. Got complacent. I saved what I needed under my notes on my phone as a quick way to post when I'm not at my computer. Missed that I got a few extra words.
L,
There are some goofy characters on your current advert page. Says something like "Posting Script" right across Jamie's face.
J
Thanks a lot! You wouldn't believe how many people I've told since I noticed. ;)