Lisuex

Hi! I'll be updating Going Feral soon. THX for patience, I got distracted and the story suffered. But it's better now :) and almost ready for posting.

BlueAdalhaid

Feel free to check out my story "Saving You" hope you like it❤❤

Lisuex

Hi! Sorry it took so long for me to read your story. Life happens lol. Anyway, I read chapter one. I really liked the gothic/noir tone. It’s been forever since I’ve read one, so it was refreshing. The lack of dialogue tags drove me a little nuts though. It could be that I’m use to reading more traditionally published stuff though. (I literally just finished a book “on combat” that I think your character would like ;) ) I hope this feedback helps. If you want me to leave it as a comment, or if you want me to comment on chapter 2 just let me know. 
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Lisuex

Maybe I will ;)
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Lisuex

The rumors of my death have been greatly exaggerated. Yes, I may have crossed the Navajo Nation in June with no air conditioning and little water, and sure, I was a little closer to a wild bear than the Yellowstone park ranger appreciated, but I didn't die. I was on holiday. And now I'm back. So is Lisuex Roadtrip. 
          
          Thank you to @jaxonshadowwick for the kind words
          Welcome to the new hitchhikers
          And this one's for @Minusfractions 
          
          I hope you enjoy!
          read, vote, add to lists and write!!