@Jackal6582 Thanks for the compliment! I'm glad you enjoyed it. It definitely isn't as good as I would've liked it to be, but that is also why I am writing the rewrite for it currently. To fix the problems I had with it while keeping the original as it always was, more or less to show a progression of my writing for me to look back at and see how far I came. Sorry for my rambling. If you've got any questions about anything in the book, then feel free to ask. Considering its been finished for a while now, and all I'm doing is doing a rewrite until new content is released for the RWBY show, I don't have any problems with revealing things that didn't manage to make it into first book.
