I read Heir of silence . It is really good and I like your writing style but some points are not logical for me. For example, the age of the main couple is so young to have these dramatic changes. She is almost 22 to be super woman. I mean speak languages and be head of a new organization or company without suitable resources and experience it doesmake sense. You know, in the beginning, I expected she became an assassin or something like that to make sense. To make her so powerful among men who are supposed to be strong, it makes her weaker. Her strength must be seen through their power to shine and control the room like you want. They gave up so fast, and all the men fell for her so fast without good explanation. Nicolas should be stronger to match her power and strength. Her enemy didn't have a strong scene to understand their depth of their enmity. Her mother brought her back to be protected by her brothers, who didn't seem strong enough to deal with other enemies. I had a feeling that there were a bunch of teenagers, not mafia men who are capable. You are promising the writer good luck .