Hello
I am french and in your story, 《Summer Bucketlist》i saw that you have been write 《tomber en amour》but, it's not exactly how we say 《fall in love》, we say 《tomber amoureux》for a boy or《tomber amoureuse》for a girl.
I'm sorry if there are mistakes in my text. I'm only 14 years old and I don't write english proprely yet. Hope your understand!
And, your story seams to be very interesting!
I will read it