LittleKBlue

@LittleKBlue  I look forward to seeing what else you have to write you are very talented, keep up the good work.

@LittleKBlue  let me first start by saying I have been a teacher for 13 years in language arts so I have been critiquing stories for a very long time. It’s hard to believe that this was written by a nine-year-old. I have middle school kids who can’t write this well. Your introduction was very well done it really told us where the story was going it flowed well and I understood what you were trying to say. It set it up very nice for this story and for other stories to come