pamelacici
You are a freaking good writer, please do continue writing, your use of grammar, the feeling of the characters are all spot on. Try writing a story of your own that has nothing to do with fan fiction and if you want I could edit and correct it for you. Keep writing and I am sure you will do better. Keep up with your creativity.
LittleKittyWasabi
@pamelacici oh my, thank you so much!! I don't even know how to say what I'm feeling right now. Just thank you! I am in the process of developing a world. I have some stories kinda started. I'll work on getting them finished soon (and finish my fan fic).