Hi, just read starlight and I love it. Haven’t read any fan fiction similar to it and I really like it. I have a suggestion though you don’t have to listen. I think you should keep the storyline how it is with all the hostility. Though I think you should have it where Alice didn’t see Eva swan coming. Since her gift already messes with Jasper and Edward’s gift. Though Alice would like her anyway, while Eva continues to do her best by herself. Keeping the fact that she was now a vampire to herself from Bella, her father, and friends. While the others watch her from a distance while Eva does her best to avoid them and the Cullen coven eventually gets impressed by her restraint for a new born vampire. Eva continues to think they are some vampire cult and refuses to join them and avoids them which makes Alice sad and continues to try and be her friend. All the while the Edward, Bella, and Jacob plot plays out.