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Right guys I really need some help, I'm entering this competition and I need to submit 10 poems (it's not the Atty's) so this is my shortlist. I'd really appreciate it if people could let me know if they think it shows enough of a range and if not what's missing, or if any poems sound too similar/have themes that are to similar. Basically please tell me if this is a good selection! I will massively appreciate any feedback that you wonderful people care to give me :D
          The list is:
          princess of the sea
          do you remember the stars
          painting the town red
          cigarettes and streetlamps
          and then there was nothingt
          he liberation of scarlet rivers
          soldiers
          christmas decorations
          flooded
           my dialect poem
          THANK YOU :D xxx

Hey guys sorry for disappearing for so long, I'm back now! Experimenting with new forms of poetry for the Atty's and would really appreciate some feedback/suggestions of other forms, thank you :) xx

@Thundersun I really like it :) although I did think that the first verse alone could stand as a poem in its own right :)

Think everyone who's into poetry should check this out.. I mean WOW http://www.wattpad.com/story/1520156-these-skies-in-which-we-rust

@DeliaPomerantz Haha thank you :D

I saw your thread on the poetry forum and read some of your stuff.  Just telling you that you're getting a fan today :)  Didn't want you to think I'm a creepy stalker just fanning you for no reason. 

Haha me too, it's usually southerners :P I'm only kidding :) x

@inkedontomyheart haha glad you took that in the banterlike way I intended :P could of been a bit awkward otherwise :P x

@Thundersun Thank you :)

Just published my first collection of poems with a similar theme :) Any constructive criticism is appreciated please give it a read! :) xx