Kazuya_Mishima_Wins
Hey, I read your continuation of a cold but beautiful relationship and I would like to know your thoughts on this OC story. It's very simplified I need some time to finish it and send it to you. This is a simplified version: I made an entire story about two old that are both all tribe hybrids,(basically they breed hybrids until they had all 10 tribes) who are lovers. One has firescales, frostfire breath(dont ask) is and animus and pretty much has every rare trait. The other is blind but can sense life itself and has mind control to a certain degree. Together they became kings of their own tribe,: the AstroWings. Which can be joined by any dragon who wishes to. Together, they had 3 dragonets (don't ask how). I'm thinking of making that a story here on wattpad. Ok, the start sounded weird., so, basically there was a prophecy given by clearsight that when ten tribes were united into a dragon, the world would be either destroyed or led to an era of peace, so another talons of peace called the concord of scales bred dragons until they got Aetherion, who would later be known as Prism King Aetherion of the AstroWings. But he had too much power, so they tried again but the egg wouldn't hatch even under magic. Much later than normal, it hatched but only one dragon was there to care the dragon that came out of it; Mira, a humble LeafWing, who named him Caelux, who would later be known as Whisper King Caelux of the Astrowings. Then they met. A few months later, they started dating and, shortly after founding their kingdom, they married each other.
Kazuya_Mishima_Wins
THX. I'll probs send you a draft of the first chapter cuz I know NOTHING about writing books or fanfics. It will probably take me months but I probably won't forget this favor. See us sometime!
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LittleSoda4You
@Kazuya_Mishima_Wins You're asking ME for advice? Gosh, I've never been asked for my thoughts before on writing. Ok so uhm, I really like the idea and concept, it sounds very interesting, complex yet the little things make it sound worthwhile, Mary Sue characters are wonderful in certain circumstances, fated love is good, lore is good, story is good. I like it! I believe in you! If you believe in yourself, then you can do anything! Make sure to have fun when you're writing!
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