lunaerishia06

Author you write really nice , i must say . You made me hate the character "Zayn " so much till the end .. I know you already specified that he is in a relation and that you are yourself a new author and I know it's really hard to write stories because I am also an author . Anyway .. i liked it .. I don't know why... Or did you purposefully made Megha's character as naive and submissive ..maybe she was so hurt to even hope that she enjoyed in the worst . 
          
          
          Ok leave it . The story was on my nerves but I know they are characters and you portrayed something real . There are people like them . Adjusting like this . I hope you good luck for your future writing. Also I have voted in a weird order because I was immersed in the story so I forgot to vote . I am sorry for that .. 
          
          And if you ever get time do give a try to my book also "sold to silence Tale of a purchased bride". ◉⁠‿⁠◉*A little bit of self Ad . 
          
          Bbye

Little_Princess-a

Sorry, dear, I didn’t see your message until now. Thank you so much for your opinion—it means a lot to me, and thank you for your support.
            
            And for sure, I’m going to read your story very soon.
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ishiii_writeo

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Girl, i read the story written by you named  "Deatiny" in that story tha male lead(zyan) fucking cheated on the female lead(megha). Like he had hickies  from another girl whike he had  a wife. And if he loved sheren(his gf) then why he started having feeling for megha but he maybe dosen't have true feeling for sheren  so he falled for megha but when he started having little feeling for megha then why didn't he breakup with sherna. And you should maybe try putting warnings or rules in the starting if the book or chapters so the readers know they are reading a book which had two womens trope like the male lead had wife an his gf or maybe a cheating trope, it would ve really helpful for anyone who would read your book to know what they are reading.

Little_Princess-a

@ishiii_writeo no no I didn’t feel bad dear. I appreciate your concern.
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ishiii_writeo

@ishiii_writeo Thanks for clearing my doubts about the book and sorry if you feel bad or my msg hurt you.
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Little_Princess-a

 Hi ishiii_writeo,
            Thanks for reading Deatiny and taking the time to leave feedback. Just to clarify, I’ve already tagged the story as a love triangle, and it’s made clear from the first episode that Zayn is in a relationship. The story is meant to explore emotional conflict and complicated choices—not to romanticize cheating, but to show the messy sides of love.
            
            That said, I understand these themes aren’t for everyone, and I appreciate your suggestion about content notes. I’ll look into adding a short note at the beginning for extra clarity.
            
            Thanks again for sharing your thoughts.
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