Littlesister72

@Littlesister72 I am just now seeing this. I am so sorry. I saw GTHEA mention this but have not started it. I’m beyond disappointed in ITA. It’s completely nonsensical. The chapters almost seem out of order and seriously finding out about the video should have been no later than chapter 10 . She built this huge following only not deliver.

I don’t know if you read The Way Of Flowers by Heather2485? I really enjoyed it, felt grounded and adult. And it had pace! 
            
            ITA is completely stuck and we’ve been dragging along for 6 months! At this point I hardly care if he redeems himself it not - not that I ever really thought it was possible… but def losing interest in how she gets there, not sure she knows herself actually. 

Hi Wendy! Oh IiTA is getting on my nerves!! It’s totally stuck in the weeds now. In fact, after Choices finish I’m not sure what’ll still hook me onto Wattpad. I feel like 80% of it’s AI or written by children LOL!! 

But you’re right about me moving on from it, removed from my library. Wishing you well with the rest of it. 

I’m not the only reader who suspects AI. Your timelines aren’t consistent, characters have the same revelations about big stuff (affair and not fathering the child) twice. Who would forget that stuff? So it’s not surprising readers are suspicious. At the very least you aren’t reading your chapters before publishing and I really don’t understand why you don’t take the time to do that. I assume you’ve deleted my comment so I can’t see exactly how snippy I was, I’m sorry I pissed you off, but I think it’s legit commentary. And like I say, reading other comments while looking for my own I can see that I’m far from alone. 

Oh hey, it’s no biggie. Just happens a lot on here and it can get a little frustrating. Good luck with the book.