@Goldranger35 okay i will be honest about it but this is just my opinion. I'm kinda confused with this story, it maybe because there is only one part and you haven't got the chance to explain it better? I'm not sure, but with the summary the plot sounds interesting. I also like how the main character is different? or that he has powers is a better word. So my tip is dont quit on ot and keep up the good work!:)