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@Bluepizz  
          Ha thanks and I will soon, I'm just on a vacation trip with the family, and I am busy I will try though. 

@Liveyolifewisely  please keep on updating and DONT  DELETE  you can make something really good out of this just be patient

@N_D_Iverson 
          Ha your welcome, I love it the story, you're doing great. 

Hey Jaci, thank you for adding This Would Be Paradise to your reading list. I hope you like it!