LivingShadow

@MissQuigReaper Awww shucks!! thank u!! of course i will! 

MissQuigReaper

Heyy!
          I just read your book - and commented, so please read it and comment back - and I just read your poems.
          They rock. Like, seriously.
          So, yeah... Just thought I'd tell ya that  (:  Please read mine and my cousins ( Okasuma_No_Shi ) because hers rock too.
          Thanks (:

LivingShadow

Okeydokey, guys i need your help.    Imma give you guys a taste of a new story i was thinking of uploading. Gimme feedback!! 
          
          A Lily Among Thorns. 
          
          “Ahhowowow!” 
          
          My opponent screamed as the lance struck his chest. Sir Laden was knocked off his horse. As both of his peasant squires, of which their names I do not know, ran to council him, Sir Laden spat blood at my feet. I took off my helm, ran a hand through my sweaty hair, and smirked, trying to hold back my laughter. Even when cheating my brother could never beat me. A slow traitor-of-a-chuckle escaped my lips. Still chuckling, I turned my sterling grey war horse, Hero, around. We trotted back to the stables. On are way there, Hero snorted. 
          
          
          Whadda ya think??? FEEDBACK!!   Thanks