Arestiya arcasto

Is this Arestiya? 
          
          This is Theo

Hi, I was wondering if you could check out my story?

Friends......updated a new  poem so check it out and vote and comment

Beauty of a spirit is a wide rang of love that falls from the sky
          Darkness of shadow is replaced my light of angle
          Has the sun ever said  to earth "you owe me  for giving  you light"
          then give come we humans ask for revenge
          Our thirst for blood change the earth
          Killing our own brothers and sisters
          When will we come to our senses
          Of understanding love
          Live the life of fantasy with peace not war
          Help the needy but dont be greedy
          Nature and animal and world of fools
          We are the one who is truly confused
          We have the brain so lets use it again
          Lets conqure our fears and tears
          Let the world shine
          

I have posted my new story....pls do read it and vote and comment
          Love livy