Livssunshine

Update: i just re-wrote the whole story to make it more detailed, more correct grammar wise and to give the main characters more of a personality.
          	
          	Part 1 isn't finished, I just wanted to give you an update on how I improved the story. 

Livssunshine

Update: i just re-wrote the whole story to make it more detailed, more correct grammar wise and to give the main characters more of a personality.
          
          Part 1 isn't finished, I just wanted to give you an update on how I improved the story.