SweetPeaCO13
Liza this chapter was amazing but so sad. it broke my heart
LizaRae
LizaRae
Also, if you are reading it, please comment!
LizaRae
hope whoever is reading my story enjoys it! ☺
SweetPeaCO13
Ok I was planning on it when I get to the next part I'm just not entirely sure what I want him to look like
SweetPeaCO13
Ok sounds good. tell me what you think of mine
LizaRae
@carahcathleen I really like it! but please describe the guys looks even though I know hes hot, indulge us a little more!
SweetPeaCO13
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SweetPeaCO13
So u like the story but I think you need to be a bit more descriptive about you and Michelle's relationship. get more in depth and make the reader feel your pain with you and make them know exactly what Michelle did so much that they have a hatred for her as well
LizaRae
@carahcathleen Omg! you totally can tell who it is and I love that! but shh, its a secret and I will be more descriptive im just not at that part yet, im going to have a paragraph or so for every year after that, leading up to now.