Lizzfizzwizz1

ok so everyone i am thinking of stating a new story i really hope you guys think it is good here is the prologue:
          	
          	How would you feel if you were running away from yourself, trying to escape the terrors that is your mind, running away from the monster that is trying to escape from the cage that is your deep dark blackened soul.
          	Your trying to run away from the agonising pain that is coursing through your body, all you can feel is the pain as your bones crack and your muscles tear then join together again in a new form, the stronger, larger, and broader shape that is now your body, all you can hear is your heartbeat and your quick intakes of the sweet oxygen around you, until you hear an ear-piercing scream split through the barriers around your ears, only to realise it's yours.
          	You lay on the ground screaming in pain, it's too much! You can't take it any more.
          	You scream your last breath as the monster that hides within your body breaks free of its barricades, you can feel your consciousness slowly slip away, away into the deep dark crevices of the unknown.
          	The monster takes over and you can feel its animal instincts take over your body, you're not yourself any more, you can't control your body, your mind, and the hunger that is threatening to escape.

Lizzfizzwizz1

ok so everyone i am thinking of stating a new story i really hope you guys think it is good here is the prologue:
          
          How would you feel if you were running away from yourself, trying to escape the terrors that is your mind, running away from the monster that is trying to escape from the cage that is your deep dark blackened soul.
          Your trying to run away from the agonising pain that is coursing through your body, all you can feel is the pain as your bones crack and your muscles tear then join together again in a new form, the stronger, larger, and broader shape that is now your body, all you can hear is your heartbeat and your quick intakes of the sweet oxygen around you, until you hear an ear-piercing scream split through the barriers around your ears, only to realise it's yours.
          You lay on the ground screaming in pain, it's too much! You can't take it any more.
          You scream your last breath as the monster that hides within your body breaks free of its barricades, you can feel your consciousness slowly slip away, away into the deep dark crevices of the unknown.
          The monster takes over and you can feel its animal instincts take over your body, you're not yourself any more, you can't control your body, your mind, and the hunger that is threatening to escape.