Hi there! I just wanted to give you some feedback on your book, my bully kidnapped me, and other things c:
1. Your book has a lot of spelling/grammar mistakes, make sure you check your spelling before publishing, and use more commas.
2. Slow things down a little. Explain what happened, instead of just skimming over it in a sentence.
3. Try to think about what is going to happen in each chapter, it seemed too rushed to me.
This one isn't about your book, but don't steal other people photos. You profile pic isn't yourself, I can tell you are much younger by the books you write :/
Ta ta, Savannah.