themoonchildd

Hi there! I just wanted to give you some feedback on your book, my bully kidnapped me, and other things c:
          1. Your book has a lot of spelling/grammar mistakes, make sure you check your spelling before publishing, and use more commas.
          2. Slow things down a little. Explain what happened, instead of just skimming over it in a sentence.
          3. Try to think about what is going to happen in each chapter, it seemed too rushed to me.
          This one isn't about your book, but don't steal other people photos. You profile pic isn't yourself, I can tell you are much younger by the books you write :/
          Ta ta, Savannah.

poniesrule777

Hello. I love your book so much. I hope you can write more books that are completed. I wish you can write a fanfic about Zayn and Perrie. Also a little mix fanfic because I love little mix and one direction so much. I luv all your books.

ananyaaam

Hey there :) I was just wondering if you needed an editor or something. Coz I read your Zayn Malik fanfic and the grammar, punctuation and spellings are all...terribly wrong! If you need help, feel free to ask me or anyone else. There's also a thread in the Clubs which has a link to all editors. :)