AsherMcdonld
Hi I hope you’re doing well these days!
Lklkl88
AsherMcdonld
Hi are you alive? I was just checking up on you if you’re just on break or something just let us know. Hope you’re doing okay tho.
Kahamilovecat
What happened???Why did your atop???
Lklkl88
I updated my book!!!
AsherMcdonld
@Lklkl88 ok well I thank you for not giving up on it :)
Lklkl88
@AsherMcdonld it's like art block but for books I'm gonna do it someday I don't now if it's gonna be soon tho
AsherMcdonld
Hello! Hope you’ve had a nice day!
Lklkl88
@AsherMcdonld tyy I might delete the book and rewrite it sometime maybe not... But I won't abandon the book
Lklkl88
@AsherMcdonld I have had a nice day but I haven't gotten any new ideas for the book but somehow I have so many other ideas for other books I don't now, maybe I should make some new books and rewrite "a broken heart and a broken face" later
AsherMcdonld
Hello again hope your doing well :)
AsherMcdonld
Hello! Hope your doing well! Can’t wait for the next chapter!
Lklkl88
@AsherMcdonld I know it's taking a long time but I'm trying to make this chapter very good also I'm doing great!
AsherMcdonld
Soooo two things:
1. You have to make sure that the background is the same (I seriously don’t remember snow in the other two chapters)
2. You have got to make your chapters longer if your gonna be making everyone reading these take so long
I for one just find the second one a bit annoying but I believe the first one is something you should work on. Im not upset just given some constructive criticism.
AsherMcdonld
Hello! I was just wondering two things so…
1. How are you doing?
2. How is chapter 3 coming along?