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Hey! Can you take a look to my book that in writing?  If you like maybe also try to read it . It's my first book . I'm sorry for disturbing you.  

Yur a pretty coo peson :))

Thank you

Hey guys....

Heya fam! 
          I was wondering if you could be as kind as to take the time to read my story and give me some feedback. This is my first fanfic and I'd really appreciate it. Have a great day. Byeee =D